高中英语满分作文写作技巧:十句作文法
重点诠释:
十句作文法是有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法,考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高写作水平。其基本模式为:
1. 段为开头,包括两句。句为主题句,点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句,进一步说明和支持主题句。两者关系也可倒过来,由句说明情况,第二句点明主题。
2. 第二段为正文,共七句。第三句为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与段的主题相关或一致。第四至九句为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意好过渡,以使段落逻辑合理,结构得当。
3. 第三段为结尾,简化为一句,也是全文的总结句, 它将前面的内容总结为一个结果,表明自己的论点。
注意:要提高语言表达的档次,在句式运用上就不能一味地使用简单句和称述句,而应该根据实际情况灵活运用所学的各种句式。丰富的句式有助于考生在高考中出类拔萃,赢得高分。
写作典例:
电视在人们的日常生活中占有很重要的地位,电视传播不断深层次地影响着每一个人。请以“Television” 为题,写一篇有关其所带来的积极影响的英语短文。
分析:1。这篇书面表达的中心思想是电视所带来的积极影响。2。电视对现代生活的影响是多方面的,考生不要试图面面俱到,如果涉及面太多,文章反而显得松散,我们只选择几个方面进行写作,可用举例的方法合理安排语言材料。
范文:
Television
Television presents a vivid world in front of us.1(主题句) Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. 2(扩展句)
Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.3(主题句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for people who can not go to formal university.4(扩展句) For another,children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as “The Animal World” and “The Mickey Mouse and DuckDonald”.5(扩展句) Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes.6(扩展句) Furthermore, we can learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs.7(扩展句) And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercise in some special TV training courses,8(扩展句)In short,the effect of TV’s educational role is becoming more and more obvious.9(扩展句)
Having viewed these aspects, and with many more TV programs produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. 10(总结句)